"Review of Literacy Narrative"

I think I did a good job on the narrative that I wrote. I would have to say that it is not one of my best but I did okay on it. If I had another chance on it, I would definitely make a few changes though. I would put in a lot more descriptive words. I didn’t use many descriptive words, though I should have because that was part of the assignment. I would try to make it more organized and structured to fit the style I was using to write the paper. I used the chronological order style, going from when I was in preschool all the way up until now, and everything in between. I have learned a lot of things since I was in preschool but even now I still have lots to learn about reading and writing. I am not done yet. I would not change the writing style that I used because I like the way that I did it the first time. It was simple and not complicated and an easy writing style to read and understand, as well as write. I think that I did pretty well on my first paper but there are still a few changes that I would probably make to the paper if I had a second chance on it. I would proof read it to make sure there were no mistakes and I would let a couple of my friends proof read it also to double make sure that I have everything down correctly. Once that is done I would turn it in and hopefully get a good grade.